Monday, January 27, 2014

My syrian hamster unexpectantly had babies last night. ive never had one before?

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My Family bought me 1 syrian brown female hamster for christmas from petco (who was apparently pregnant)
she ran a lot on the wheel and drank an ounce of water every 6 hours which i though was a little weird..
so today i get up and give her a treat. She came forward with her mouth open (not really yawing) looking like crap.

and i see a bunch of baby hamsters...(all pink and nasty. yet kinda cute...). so i alert the family and we do some research and learn they eat babies who were touched by humans (and we didn't touch em)

so i go to my room and i see her vibrating in her corner making kind of a crunch noise. not really sure if it is her tearing up her paper bedding or her eating the babies.

if she were to eat them will there be blood, bones, or will her droppings be big?

lastly. i have a huge plastic container as a cage. that she can see through, if i watch my 29 inch tv in my room will she eat the babies thinking im watching her?



Answer
Well they do eat there babies not only if a human touches them but if they are disturbed because they feel they are in danger.. If she ate any of her babies you will tell that the droppings would be more whole form to them. Another thing most of the time they don't eat all there baby just part of it, so you will see a dead baby in there and parts of it body..I've actually never seen any blood from when they eat there babies and i watched them do it along with mice. The only problem your t.v being loud might disturb her and causer her to eat her babies. Any noise distracts a hamster because they are really blind and don't see well and so they depend on there hearing.. But good luck with the babies and mom...

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Samora


âAlec.â The beast hissed.
I stood, paralyzed in the middle of the forest, with my hair standing on an end at the back of my neck. The dark creature loomed around me, circling me with its long spiked tail.
âIâve been waiting for you.â It said.
I closed my eyes, wanting it to be over, for my life to end. I grind my foot on the ground slightly, letting my foot sink under the soft dirt for foundation. I feel like I was going to fall.
âLetâs get this over with it.â I gritted through my teeth.
The creature laughed, its low and raspy voice echoed through the forest, like a cough. It suddenly turned to me, I could feel its red eyes piercing me and its hot and foul breath hit my face. I squeezed my eyes tightly shut just to make sure I would not see this monsterâs face. Itâs the last thing I want to see before I die.
âYou think Iâm stupid? Ha!â he said, âIâll let you enjoy a happy trip to pain first before I finish you. The master wants entertainment.â
The creature laughed again, its voice, getting distant. I suddenly heard laughter, a clamor of voices and scuttling of feet.
âLook up little hero.â A voice said. âIf youâre brave enough to do so.â
With that, I opened my eyes and realized that I was now in a huge stadium filled with cheering crowds and huge monsters. I was in the middle of the stage. I was the bait. I was the show.
I felt warm power generate through me as anger shot through my veins. How could they be so cruel? Oh right, they were monsters. And monsters will be monsters.
A small flabby lizard like creature walked across me carrying a horn twice as big as its size, yet it did not have any trouble carrying it.
âLet the game begin!â the beast said, he was now sitting beside his master, who was smiling. His eyes were lit in anticipation and so were the crowds.
They know this little guy wonât last long. I could see them taking bets already, one or two minutes or so. I even heard another guy shouted seconds.
Great, just what I need. People watch me as I die, while they eat their hot and buttered popcorns.
The horn was sounded and by my side, a huge gate opened and a huge creature came out. The crowd gasped.
It had the head of a crocodile, a unicorn horn, a tail of two serpents, a body of a lion and a torso of a fish. I donât know how you put that all together, the maker of this beast didnât know either, but it all did. Its other parts hung limply on the sides, marks of scratches, burns and rotten meat all scraped wildly around the creatureâs body.
It smiled crookedly, its ten cat eyes that were scattered all over its face were red and yellow, all fixed on me.
I should have run, but instead I could feel the Instincts surging upon me. âBattle Instinctsâ as Chris would say it. My eyes were alert and my body was full of energy and strength. I feel like I could break a piece of metal in half.
The monster charged forward. I stepped aside just in time before it hit me with its long silver horn.
I absorbed the heat vibrating around my body, lead it to my hands and formed a huge ball of fire.
I aimed the fire on the creature and threw it. Unfortunately, the creature was too fast and was trained for it that it easily dodged the attack.
Its smile faded, knowing that I wouldnât be an easy target.
It grunted and charged forward, I turned aside but this time the beast whirled backward, making its serpent tails face me. Its long and sharp fangs sank through my calf before I could even turn.
I howled in pain as acidic venom coursed through my body.
Please, tell me if its confusing or not.
Sorry for the grammar issues...haha. I'm only 14 so I'm still confused of how to do use this word and that----



Answer
Firstly and most confusingly, it seems very odd to me that a beast would have the power to teleport you to an arena. You could play with it and make it kinda funny, and maybe that's what you're going for, but it doesn't work as something to take very seriously as is.
I think your monster shouldn't look like something out of a mad scientist's blender, unless, again, you are going for comedy.
If you are, punch it up.
A few grammatical errors really break the flow, but the description and pacing isn't too bad; just needs some polish. Hard to judge without knowing context a bit better.




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